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Jul 16, 2009
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Mother
She was lying in her bed
Both daughters were near
Strong bodies curved around
Bless-ed frame of woman
By holy work and holy water
Their tears were pure, shimmering
Like her eyes, her diamond hair
The sisters breathed her presence
Everything about her
They stroked her shoulders, her arms
All she had done
They kissed her cheeks, her hands.
All she had given
They held around her waist
All they had learned
Waiting with her in the dark
The air was full of years
Stories fluttered on the wall
— Yvonne D, Jul 16, 2009
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meic
16 years 11 months ago
The last two lines are
Yvonne D
16 years 11 months ago
I was inspired by the story
Diatom Shells
16 years 9 months ago
great
Yvonne D
16 years 9 months ago
Thank you...
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