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Jul 20, 2009
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These tales
Dwelling :
on these fairy tales
are my hopes in full
as masted sails
filling the whole
of depths within
my special world
that has surly been
broadened with knowledge
without social grace
but the dreams of a lifetime
in ones private space
on these fairy tales
are my hopes in full
as masted sails
filling the whole
of depths within
my special world
that has surly been
broadened with knowledge
without social grace
but the dreams of a lifetime
in ones private space
— mantiscepter, Jul 20, 2009
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Seren
16 years 10 months ago
This is brilliant … Loved
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