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Thinking

When I think
about it
too much
I seem
to realize
that maybe
I
shouldn't think
too much
about it
although
I do
really need
to think
this through
and thinking
about it
helps...
— Fleur MacDonald, Jul 23, 2009

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floetry

16 years 10 months ago

the poem has an intriguing

the poem has an intriguing title and makes the reader get intimidated in an interesting way and i really like that. Keep it up!
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Another lovely write

Another lovely write thoughtful maybe ? ... lol hugz I am tired off to bed Love Jayne x x come back and look when I am not so tired ... :)

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