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Cracker Jack Candy Ring

Sitting alone in Wichita

Because of the weight

Afraid I’m coming apart

 

Working on three fingers more

Of Kentucky bourbon

Stinging good all the way down

One more please bartender

 

Why should I care

If she buys books she’ll never read

Because they may have something to say

 

Why should I care

If she just can’t seem to get it right

And makes me throw punches in the air

I can’t quite place it exactly

 

I know I would miss her in the morning light

More beautiful before ten in the morning

Than she could ever hope to be

In black sequins and pearls

 

With the clarity of closing time

I walk the darkened streets to her

Hoping the Cracker Jack candy ring

Will hold her heart for another day

 

— Michael Anthony, Jul 25, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 10 months ago

What a cracker!

for a title Mike! and what a ringer for a successful piece! Intrigued by the first stanza - and why you had to make it this lone "Bar scene" (COOL by the way!) but out in WITCHITA - Kansas???! Were you thinking of some ol' country song? lol I just melted at that last stanza: 'With the clarity of closing time' (sober as a judge right!?) but the way you put it! - sure she'll settle for a "Cracker Jack candy ring!" I mean who wouldn't!! :) WEll done! Bonita j

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