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Jul 25, 2009
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Cracker Jack Candy Ring
Sitting alone in Wichita
Because of the weight
Afraid I’m coming apart
Working on three fingers more
Of Kentucky bourbon
Stinging good all the way down
One more please bartender
Why should I care
If she buys books she’ll never read
Because they may have something to say
Why should I care
If she just can’t seem to get it right
And makes me throw punches in the air
I can’t quite place it exactly
I know I would miss her in the morning light
More beautiful before ten in the morning
Than she could ever hope to be
In black sequins and pearls
With the clarity of closing time
I walk the darkened streets to her
Hoping the Cracker Jack candy ring
Will hold her heart for another day
— Michael Anthony, Jul 25, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
What a cracker!
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