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Oct 30, 2011
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Gouging
Slicing at veins
Oozing life,
Distress.
Gouging emotion
Frenzied , insane
Pulping flesh
Rip eyes from the sockets
Scratch out the name
Unbearable to remain
A band of steel
Ratcheted around the heart muscle
Crushing existence
Raw, infinite power
Dicing into throw away chunks
Tearing biting stripping resolve
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
13 years 8 months ago
Such a...
powerful piece! I felt the despair, the power of it! I'm not sure which side you were writing from, but I felt that it could be either. Nothing to criticize. Love ya, ~ Gee
lou
13 years 8 months ago
Gee
Thank you
Love Lou
Candlewitch
13 years 8 months ago
Dear Lou,
Ouch! This one jumps off the page to take bite out of the reader. Very dynamic. I loved it all.
Love, Cat
lou
13 years 8 months ago
Cat
thank you so much.
Love Lou
lou
13 years 8 months ago
Hi
It is about mental harm rather than physical, how we can torture ourselves.
glad you liked it
lou
emogothgirl
13 years 6 months ago
ow
my eyes hurt but great job.
lou
13 years 6 months ago
lol
thanks
lou