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Oct 30, 2011
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Gouging
Slicing at veins
Oozing life,
Distress.
Gouging emotion
Frenzied , insane
Pulping flesh
Rip eyes from the sockets
Scratch out the name
Unbearable to remain
A band of steel
Ratcheted around the heart muscle
Crushing existence
Raw, infinite power
Dicing into throw away chunks
Tearing biting stripping resolve
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
13 years 11 months ago
Such a...
powerful piece! I felt the despair, the power of it! I'm not sure which side you were writing from, but I felt that it could be either. Nothing to criticize. Love ya, ~ Gee
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Gee
Thank you
Love Lou
Candlewitch
13 years 11 months ago
Dear Lou,
Ouch! This one jumps off the page to take bite out of the reader. Very dynamic. I loved it all.
Love, Cat
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Cat
thank you so much.
Love Lou
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Hi
It is about mental harm rather than physical, how we can torture ourselves.
glad you liked it
lou
emogothgirl
13 years 9 months ago
ow
my eyes hurt but great job.
lou
13 years 9 months ago
lol
thanks
lou