Flower Music

look at the fountain
the summer buzzing
while your love plays
music upon a rose

bothered by a mistake
your mood wavering
found delight at last
in the quiet of flowers.

would that be reason
enough to light a smile
when days of silence
have not succeeded?

— hugo la rosa, Jul 29, 2009

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Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

Hugo

I've got to respect a poem which ends in a question. Beautiful writing here. Very pensive and thought provoking. Always, Cat

hugo la rosa

16 years 10 months ago

Cat

Thank you for the compliment. You're quite a good writer yourself. Regards. Hugo.

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Dearest Hugo...

This poem is like a soothing meditation... One that's now inside of me... Touching my heart. It's very, very beautiful. Thank you... Raven

hugo la rosa

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Raven

Thank you for the visit. I can see the relation between the poem and what happened to you in these last few days. Hoowever, you keep going as strong of character as ever. Thank you for your example and your soothing kindness. Best Regards, Hugo

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