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Jul 29, 2009
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Sitting At The Eloquent Mirror
I see my reflection
But it's not really me
I don't recognize
This person I see
Maybe this mirror
Is defective somehow
Broken or damaged
Though I don't know how
The looking glass frame
Bedazzled with jewels
Seems overly ornamented
For a window of fools
Could the mirror itself
Though shiny and bright
Be distorted by glare
From reflecting the light?
It's then that I realize
The distortion I see
The glass isn't defective
But my perception of me
— ginnydragon54, Jul 29, 2009
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