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Aug 01, 2009
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The Final Voyage
The Final Voyage
Last night, as sleep crept through my mind, I had the strangest dream.
I was aboard an elven ship with hull of palest green.
Her masts were made from tall oak trees; her sails of silk so white
Her elven crew ( somehow I knew ) were leaving earth that night.
The captain, tall and fair, spoke of the elves great loss and need
Of how his people worked so hard to modify man’s greed
From old Atlantis, secret isle, they’d tried to understand
But couldn’t bear the great despair as famine stalked the land
“Where will you go? Will you not stay?” I begged the captain. “Stay!”
I saw a tear gleam in his eye. “We have to leave today.
We sail for our ancestral home, where elves in peace may dwell.
Elf hearts are pure , cannot endure the screams from humans’ hell."
I asked him how a sailing ship could travel on through space
He took a chart, showed me Orion, pointed “That’s the place.
Our sails unfurl a hundred- fold, on solar winds we fly.
We’ll soon be there; leave now, take care.” All I could do was cry.
Last night, as sleep crept through my mind, I had the strangest dream.
I was aboard an elven ship with hull of palest green.
Her masts were made from tall oak trees; her sails of silk so white
Her elven crew ( somehow I knew ) were leaving earth that night.
The captain, tall and fair, spoke of the elves great loss and need
Of how his people worked so hard to modify man’s greed
From old Atlantis, secret isle, they’d tried to understand
But couldn’t bear the great despair as famine stalked the land
“Where will you go? Will you not stay?” I begged the captain. “Stay!”
I saw a tear gleam in his eye. “We have to leave today.
We sail for our ancestral home, where elves in peace may dwell.
Elf hearts are pure , cannot endure the screams from humans’ hell."
I asked him how a sailing ship could travel on through space
He took a chart, showed me Orion, pointed “That’s the place.
Our sails unfurl a hundred- fold, on solar winds we fly.
We’ll soon be there; leave now, take care.” All I could do was cry.
— Tam the Chanter, Aug 01, 2009
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Ravenshakti
16 years 10 months ago
Captivating poetry...
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
voyages
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Dearest Ian, you poem evoked
Ravenshakti
16 years 10 months ago
Ian...this is for you...
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Love the Blessing and bless
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
blessing
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
the last voyage
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
Lol that’s the name of my
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
I suppose that’s the wind
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
unbelievable
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
voyage
Janice Pearce
16 years 10 months ago
The Final Voyage
Tam the Chanter
16 years 10 months ago
voyage
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 10 months ago
A lovely write very visual
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 10 months ago
A lovely write very visual
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