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The Final Voyage

The Final Voyage
 

Last night, as sleep crept through my mind, I had the strangest dream.
I was aboard an elven ship with hull of palest green.
Her masts were made from tall oak trees; her sails of silk so white
Her elven crew ( somehow I knew ) were leaving earth that night.
 
The captain, tall and fair, spoke of the elves great loss and need
Of how his people worked so hard to modify man’s greed
From old Atlantis, secret isle, they’d tried to understand
But couldn’t bear the great despair as famine stalked the land
 
“Where will you go? Will you not stay?” I begged the captain. “Stay!”
I saw a tear gleam in his eye. “We have to leave today.
We sail for our ancestral home, where elves in peace may dwell.
Elf hearts are pure , cannot endure the screams from humans’ hell."

I asked him how a sailing ship could travel on through space
He took a chart, showed me Orion, pointed “That’s the place.
Our sails unfurl a hundred- fold, on solar winds we fly.
We’ll soon be there; leave now, take care.” All I could do was cry.
— Tam the Chanter, Aug 01, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Captivating poetry...

My Dearest Ian, This poem is written in starlight... Enchantment at it's finest! I can see it, feel it, and as I listen... it's beauty does indeed, touch a lost chord in me. I want to go too!! I am enthralled... with love, Raven
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

voyages

Praise from one such as you is to be showered in starlight . I am so glad that you are enthralled by the poor efforts of this old cave-troll You make my day bright Ian
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Dearest Ian, you poem evoked

Dearest Ian, you poem evoked two images, when an elderly Bilbo Baggins leaves on an Elven ship to sail...home...his life missions fulfilled.. ....and a passage in the book by Gary Zukov, author of *The Seat of the Soul* in it he said the Dolphin spirit was leaving the earthplane~~the earth was too violent for these sun-filled, joyous creatures. I wept both times...and now. I love you. ~A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Ian...this is for you...

My Dearest Ian... This is preying on my mind... so I'm going to say it... You ARE NOT an old cave-troll, or any kind of troll. What I feel you are; is a very charming man and poet. Now that I've made this clear... This is for you: Wisdom of serpent be yours, Wisdom of raven be yours, Wisdom of valiant eagle. Voice of swan be yours, Voice of honey be yours, Voice of the son of the stars. Bounty of sea be yours, Bounty of land be yours, Bounty of the Father of Heaven. -Traditional Celtic Blessing I hope you will accept it, with my love and respect. Raven
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Love the Blessing and bless

Love the Blessing and bless both you and Ian. Love, Anna "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

blessing

My dear Raven, You do me a great honour with this invocation, for which I am totally unworthy. But as long as you are enchanted, enthralled, entertained or enveloped in the scribblings of this old scribe, then I am encouraged to continue. With love and admiration Ian
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

the last voyage

Truly my cup runneth over, when I can move the two blythe spirits in my sphere of influence, you and Raven. I love you, too , but am far too old to be other than an elderly Bilbo Baggins. I'm so glad you enjoyed it - my precioussssss. lol Love Ian
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Lol that’s the name of my

Lol that's the name of my computer... ;-) My son named my first laptop that (this is #2 though my computer won't mind if all 5 of George Foreman's sons don't mind being called George)... when I was in the early addiction-phase... I'm not much better now, that you very much. About your poem, I feel like I've been punched in the guts today for the second time... the wind knocked out of me, so to speak... Love. ~A "You can avoid reality, but you cannot avoid the consequences of avoiding reality." Ayn Rand
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

I suppose that’s the wind

I suppose that's the wind knocked out of your sails! only in the friendliest way. love Ian ps I have read somewhere that space travel is possible using sails to catch the solar wind *8 Kindest regards Ian
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

unbelievable

this is without a shadow of a doubt the best poem i have ever read on here. I am a big fan of tolkien and the fantasy genre on the whole almost refusing to read anything but. Wow i would buy something written by you and put it proudly with all my other beloved books!!!!!!!!!!!
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 10 months ago

voyage

I'm really glad you like it. As you are a fantasy buff, you might like the rescue... I'll have a read of your poetry today, I hope, and get back to you Kindest Regards Ian T
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

The Final Voyage

I am not a fan of fantasy poetry, but I liked this one a lot Thanks for sharing~ _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 10 months ago

A lovely write very visual

You might consider on solar winds "we" to "We'd" fly. It sticks only there for me But, I do see things diferently so don't give it to much thought. Lovely poem Ian T. Sinbad/Donnie
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 10 months ago

A lovely write very visual

You might consider on solar winds "we" to "We'd" fly. It sticks only there for me But, I do see things diferently so don't give it to much thought. Lovely poem Ian T. Sinbad/Donnie

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