Poetry In Motion

— 2 Quills, Aug 04, 2009

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Ravenshakti

16 years 10 months ago

Smooth and graceful...

This is beautiful... Your words weave a tapestry, with your thoughts and feelings blending, like colors... smoothly...gracefully... What I call: "Poetry Emotion; Candy for the Soul." A sublime poem. Raven

2 Quills

16 years 10 months ago

Raven

I wanted to post something Something that described what poetry is for me What it is capable of And how it moves through my soul Although I could never describe it in it’s entirety For me it is just something that simply flows Some people tend to make it O’ so clinical in it’s design But to me it doesn’t matter how it is constructed Poetry is what you feel inside and I really could care less About the rules of such things Some people might like it, some might hate it Others may never really care But when I weave these tapestries It is my heart that’s in the air And it knows no boundaries Stay blessed Raven, Corey

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

great

your poetry is wonderful i love it

2 Quills

16 years 10 months ago

green eyes...

Many thanks for dropping by. So glad you enjoyed it. Corey

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Poetry in motion

Corey Welcome to the neo family sleepless nights for me again in the early hours fingers typing searching for the words to tumble freely so strolling through neopoets and I find You. I see this The title caught my eye. As I have described another poet in this manner by who he is by the way he moves. I do not always rhyme I just stream. My friend never ever give up on being a dreamer please We poets are the dreamers of the world inspired by so many - things that are unseen by others too blind to what there is to be seen But poets as we write from the heart that bleeds ink onto the paper that waits making that first mark the places you talk of we too have there been you are not alone in this i find We who put our hearts on paper hearts broken so many times pieces not able to ever be fixed again alone so we remain Just love this poem Electric blue so blue

2 Quills

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks, Blue...

I like to think that I see beauty in just about everything; barring things like war, torture, brutality…etc. I feel that I could never stop being a dreamer even if I tried. When I said…”no more am I a dreamer, I believe in what is real” in my mind was a reference, a kin, to the belief in the idea of reaching for your dreams in order to make them happen. But, I would certainly never turn down any encouragement offered from a fellow poet so blue. Many thanks for your sincere and warm hearted welcome, Corey

Janice Pearce

16 years 8 months ago

Poetry In Motion

Corey, Came to read, and found nothing? ____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

2 Quills

16 years 8 months ago

Yes, sorry bout that. I

Yes, sorry bout that. I didn't wish to clog up the stream but for whatever reason I am unable to delete things, so I have to do it this way, I guess. Wishing you all the best, and I thank you for your time here.

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