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A E I O
Your waking mind,
or even waking up
with you
once again--
Well, that's fine too.
A sonic disarray,
a plastique army,
guns twisting into
albino snakes,
a neon canker sore.
I reach to find the floodlit
cavity yesterday
and three years
ago in Manhattan,
where a strange crooked
dentist told me about
picking a lottery ticket
from a dead man.
And you!
Walking on the outskirts of
Charleville, finding money
in the dead soldier's
breast pocket
"A young soldier, open-mouthed, bare-headed..."
Convinced I would find you or
your ilk (to a nonexis tent),
we travelled in the blue
light of opium, the raining
drowse of city parks,
for a time
your promise was
true:
Prometheus stealing fire and
with subsidized returns
"I will tear the veils from every mystery:
mysteries of
religion or of
nature,
death,
birth,
the future,
the past,
cosmogony,
and nothingness.
I am a master of phantasmagoria..."
Christ turned inside
out, your Illuminations
Hallucinations, and mine
too, as I explained
with my green Dollar Store
cane to a few unfriendly men
in an unfriendly alley.
Though I still hear the
whispers of lotus vinyl,
and notes dancing into
glowing vowels,
your Notes From The Damned
are simply that--you returned,
of course, in Africa to scowl
once more: but what
could you have been?
I wonder this
as a mirror splits
and a record melts
as I put your eyes away.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
GB
Quillsvein1
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you
believe
16 years 10 months ago
soul searching decisions here layed bare,if you read with heart
barbsdad2003
16 years 10 months ago
Truly worthy ...
Quillsvein1
16 years 10 months ago
Thank you, Chuck
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