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To MY Mother's Glory

     TO My Mother’s Glory

 

Today is the day of glory to my mother

She restored Her glory from the

                       darkness of slavery

She hoisted Her flag of victory

                      with the millions of hands

Her smile and pride will be stable forever

for that We are ready to give anything for her

She is the women in Love and

She is the rain in mercy

She is the breeze in Peace and

She is the sea in justice

She  is the destroyer of violence and

She is  My Mother !

Yes! she is My Mother

 Here peace will rule and l

 Love  will determine us

Sacrifices are our way and

Her teachings to our life

Today is the day of our Glory

Yes! August 15th of every year

 

Dedicated to my nation’s 63rd  Independence  Day 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 14, 2009

Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

hello

Wishing you a belated Happy Independence day! Your Mother must have a very beautiful soul. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good title, and the logic is consistent. Keep writing. Always, Cat

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