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Diatom Shells
Aug 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Atlantis

Only lovers know.... Our bodies are made from the Dust of paradise.
— Diatom Shells, Aug 14, 2009
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orgami

16 years 10 months ago

three lines!!!!!!!!!

well for me this poem just sets my mind off One of my great quiet meditation when the world gets too me is to look at images from the Hubble Paradise for me is the visual of out there because Im so visually locked in Atlantis of course the great myth and second myth for me the the myth of "lovers" One great romantic collision and Im still in awe The mind bending of how it all connects from those lines is a mystery but for me it works and Im still impressed with it as a poetry peice In three lines no less
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Diatom Shells

16 years 10 months ago

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yes you guys that's what I was going for here. the myth of the garden of eden being atlantis and that being under the atlantic ocean what beauty lovers hold within themselves an incling [sp?] of paradise. thank you both, truly I am greatful -diatom shells

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