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greeneyes
greeneyes
Aug 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Day Haiku/Night Haiku



                                                    A hummingbird awakes
                                                    She sets to drink lifes nectar
                                                    from dawns morning bloom

                                                    Moon shines high above
                                                    An owl awakes to its glow
                                                    embarks on his hunt
— greeneyes, Aug 14, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Green Eyes

This ones really good, I liked the light and dark of it :) .... Love Jayne x x Moon shines high above An owl awakes to its glow my favourite lines :) ... I cant really critque Haiku not knowing much about it but I liked these two immensely We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

thanks

Thanks for your comments,I look foward to them good or bad!
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odiumscurse

16 years 10 months ago

Mellow loven calm!

I tried with smooth rictus to capture haiku, you do it so well. PHENOM:T.S

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