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A music from His flute

Music from His flute

 

A gentle music had flown in the air

that took all souls into divine world

Cows there had been blessed

He was a cowherd, because

He guided all souls to peace

Gave all endless pleasures to them

He was a cowherd, because

He put an end to all devils

rescued all innocent souls

He was a cowherd, because

His music from His flute is a way

to all misguided souls to correct their path

He as a cowherd, because

It is giving wisdom even to fools

It is giving bliss even to sinners

He was a cowherd, because

he led one to the sound of His flute

To reach endless Peace and happy

He was the resting place of our souls

in sorrow and in happiness

 


— SAKTHEEE2007, Aug 16, 2009

Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Krishna’s flute summons us

Krishna's flute summons us all quite poetically ;-) ~A "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's

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