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Fleur MacDonald
Fleur MacDonald
Aug 17, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fuzzy

I went to Netherland
on Saturday
I don't remember
a thing today

my head hurts
this new day
completely fuzzy
I could say

bacon and eggs
for breakfast today
to keep the
headache at bay

too much bubbly
during the day
not much to eat
I will forever pay
— Fleur MacDonald, Aug 17, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

LMAO .... You have

the best sense of humour we need to go out and get shitfaced Fleur lmfao ... really ... I want a hangover and I want bacon and eggs ...Love you Jayne ((((((((((((((((((((((((hugz))))))))))))))))))) mwah awesome :) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks Jayne

you are so gorgeous and I look forward to getting shitfaced with you, but please excuse my ignorance, what the fuck does imao stand for? Oh and it is a known scientific fact that fried bacon is best for hangovers. And maybe a hair of the dog too! for good measure. xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

LMAO ....

LMAO...=...Laughing my ass off .... lmfao...=...laughing my fucking ass off..sorry huni ... if I speak in tongues again smack me up the side of the head with the monitor ... :P love ya (((((hugz))))) Jayne x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

LMFAO

I love you Fleur I was having a shitty day till I seen your message ... I wanted a newer pic, I have lost a lot of weight and my son took that one on his phone and said to use it lol will change it in a couple of days he likes seeing it there ... Love and hugz Jayne ... hope its nice and warm down there its hot here today WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo :) We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
N

ngaioBeck

16 years 9 months ago

Fuzzy

I'm really nuts about this one and I don't know why,except that I've been Fuzzy too many times,and this says it.
L

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Fleur,

Tells the story and a familiar one at that. Good on ya! Lyz.

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