2 Quills

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— 2 Quills, Aug 20, 2009

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sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

MY my my

Well if this don't raise a few eyebrows nothing will :)))) Intense is all I can say.. Jen

sweetspirit

16 years 9 months ago

smooches

Ya know I love it..these not so politically correct writings are always my favorite..I love seeing peoples reactions.. Loving you..loving me... Your Sweetest Spirit

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

Always

me two, my sweet! me too! Your howling happy hubby Me :)

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

thanks, Cassie

…I knew I could count on you for some help. I could always use more souls if ever you grow tired of feeling like “that” child, of you know who.

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

...as well I knew you would. there's is darkness and light in us all and I chose to search for the balance between. to go against either would be like going against nature herself (in my opinioin). probably a most futile endeavour.

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Corey

Asking age old questions, we all have our own faith , I do , I really liked the yearning and passion in this write you are reaching and its showing your sharpening the edge and thats always a good thing finding the fine line to balance on ? that a whole other question lol ... well done regards Jayne :) "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

thanks, Siren

Quite right! Balance is a delicate dance indeed. I’m not saying that I don’t have faith in a creator because I do, I just chose to paint with my own brush. If we had nothing to believe in then what purpose would we have?

Kenneth Sharp

16 years 9 months ago

I definitely liked this

I definitely liked this piece. Its subversive tone and caustic rhetoric hit home with me.

2 Quills

16 years 9 months ago

thanks, Kenneth

Subversive and caustic hits right on the nose. This piece was a bit of an experiment for me, I’m a little bit surprised that nobody has sent me any hate mail over this one yet. It was good to have ya drop in here! Take care

Kenneth Sharp

16 years 9 months ago

I’d wager because the bulk

I'd wager because the bulk of the readers on this site probably skew towards being 'open-minded' in terms of allowing people to express themselves even if it offends their particular sensibilities.

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear 2 Quills

I like it.A little like life really, a decision, torn between two, faith. All plays a part. But you have a profound write here, and I enjoyed this tug of war very much. Lyz xx

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