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faith

faith travels
in secret circles
sometimes shadows
speak with tongues afire
and sometimes
well, you just gotta have
faith in the way flowers
bend towards the sun...


— Kailashana, Aug 21, 2009

Critiques

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

16 years 9 months ago

Anna,

I love this, faith is not a believe but something inside us that gives us hope! thanks always, Eddie
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Anna ...

I am speachless again, but these words touched me deeply and are beautiful ... well, you just gotta have faith in the way flowers bend towards the sun… and we are all flowers bending to whatever orbit we choose .. how beautiful is this poem .. spotlight is where it belongs ... Love and awe Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Kailashana

I love this poem! It's so immersed and drenched in truth of the highest quality. Very perceptive of the mechanics of good literature, and highly favored by the Muses. This philosophical poem is art at its best! Thank you. Best Regards, Hugo
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odd molly

16 years 9 months ago

Faith.. my favourite of all

Faith.. my favourite of all words. Yes life has a never ending faith in us and I love your last lines : *well, you just gotta have faith in the way flowers bend towards the sun…^ and today I will think of your little lovely poem and feel like this flower bending towards the sun and I'll will feel the deep happiness.. thank you. Love. o Molly
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

Thank you all. Without

Thank you all. Without *you*.... I would have no faith. Love. ~Anna "If you have come to help me, you are wasting your time. But if you have come because your liberation is wound up in mine, then let us work together." Aboriginal Activist Group, Queensland, 1970's

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