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Whatever It Might Be

Whatever it might be
Seems like we just cannot see

Whatever I could say
Remains a theory another day

Whatever I should do
Has yet not come through to you

Now while we talk about the weather
Secretly you change my life for better

Still you might never see
Whatever it might be
— Mike, Aug 24, 2009

Critiques

Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Lovely...

This is a lovely poem... and you say it all, very well...indeed. With a smooth touch. It's a pleasure to read. Thank you. Raven

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