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Aug 27, 2009
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Poem: Prone to Error
Challenges in Life are meant to be,
assisting us to reach maturity.
For our reaction to circumstance
marks personal growth beyond luck and chance.
Proven is our ability to learn,
expanding mental constraints as hearts burn.
Walking in upright, godly perfection
complements Jehovah's desire for Man's compassion.
The lasting goal is surely not religious fervor,
but moving past our fallen state of being...
Prone to error.
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— Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, Aug 27, 2009
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sha_onarainyday
16 years 9 months ago
I agree, sometimes we have
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