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Nirvana [ Nude]

Nirvana  [Nude]



Everything is dressed with lies
Nude. Truth is always nude.
Nothing is there to feel shame in it
Truth  is god and it is the right way
Nude is better than  dressed lies
Lies are taking us to endless grief
Truth alone can redeem us  and
It alone can restore our peace and glee
Decorated lies are too many in this world
They may be in power and they may rule you
Hold the shadows of truth and
Follow it’s hard and long way
To eat the fruits of life
Not to go behind such false attractions
They are mirage and not real
They may come as angels and they may show their
                                                  extra ordinary powers
They may have millions of followers in luxuries
Believe not, and hide in the shadows of mighty truth
It’s followers may be in struggles
They alone will be blessed in His court
— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 08, 2009

Critiques

L

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Sakkthee

Lovely piece from the heart, like the old saying, The Truth Will Set You Free. I like the title, and I love that you have thought this through, And you are right, no one should feel ashamed in the nudity of truth. Lyz XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 9 months ago

I was tempted....

I was tempted to make a flip remark, but seeing the reverence with which you treated this one, I choose to forego it. I too, like the nakedness of truth, but you don't always get it. You are so right about that. I was about to say that you should change a few things, but on second thought, think that you are fine with the way you have said it. I think you are writing in your language even as you write for English speakers, and that is one of the things that makes you unique. Good job, Sakkkkkk. Geezer.
S

SAKTHEEE2007

16 years 9 months ago

Drar Gee

Dear Gee I am writing in both Tamil and English poems.Is there any irregularity in my English poems Please indicate for corrections I will try to correct my self and my poems Saktheee

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