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Sep 09, 2009
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The Wind
I love the wind,
She is my friend
Her beauty and grace
shows no end
She plays with me
and lifts my hair
Wrapping me up
In arms that care
She loves to dance
And to put on a show
while she tells stories
Of long ago
She makes falling leaves
blow way up high
like little pieces of amber
dazzling the sky
She whispers sweetly
In my ear
words of love
For me to hear
I can hear her song
Throughout the air
Her voice is sweet
Her spirit is fair
When I am sad
She dries my tears
She has been my solace
for many years
She will never leave me
She has promised this
And she seals this vow
With a tender kiss
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— greeneyes, Sep 09, 2009
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Ravenshakti
16 years 9 months ago
The Wind...
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Greeneyes.
mantiscepter
16 years 9 months ago
A Kiss
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
You share Jayne's love of the wind
Candlewitch
16 years 9 months ago
Elizabeth
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
Thanks
yenti
16 years 9 months ago
Little Lady with Verdant Eyes
N.G.
16 years 9 months ago
I enjoyed reading this, and
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
thank you to my new friends
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