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The Wind

I love the wind,
She is my friend
Her beauty  and grace
shows no end
She plays with me
and lifts my  hair
Wrapping me up
In arms that care
She  loves  to dance
And to put on a show
while she tells  stories
Of long ago
She makes falling leaves
blow way up high
like little pieces of amber
dazzling the sky
She whispers sweetly
In my ear
 words of love
For  me to hear
I can hear her song
Throughout the air
Her voice is sweet
Her spirit is fair
When I am sad
She dries my tears
She has been  my solace
for many years
She will never leave me
She has promised this
And she seals this vow
With a tender  kiss





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— greeneyes, Sep 09, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

The Wind...

Ahhh... Green Eyes... The Wind is a good friend of mine too. It does whisper to my Soul. And so does your poem. Your bright weavings shine bright, with a sublime light. Your poem is exquisite. With my love, Raven.
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Greeneyes.

I wish I could have the passion and love for the wind as you. But with your passion, you have shared a breeze with this beautiful poem. May the wind be always with u. Love Lyz. XX
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mantiscepter

16 years 9 months ago

A Kiss

Yes : Seal my heart with a kiss. this was totally one of your best. I had to read it five times, I was sitting there drooling,just could move off the page to come write this to you. Outstanding poem. Mantiscepter
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

You share Jayne's love of the wind

I think you must be a happy untroubled girl, and I am happy for you, you are able and have the ease to contemplate the wind and its creative foibles, to dwell on love and its positive sides; and here to write a lovely little poem and I am sure if the wind hears it you will get that loving kiss for you deserve it. The wind that has so many traits is a wonderful poetic inspirator. Love from Ann of Norway
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Elizabeth

This piece is just beautiful! It flows like water going down hill. I loved it. You have such a great mind and imagination. Always, Cat
yenti

yenti

16 years 9 months ago

Little Lady with Verdant Eyes

Your poetry is lovely and flows as a stream to the reader, the only thing I ask is that I be allowed to breathe when reading, with a few spaces here and there LOL Have read several of your pieces today and they are all top quality and really beautiful, Yours Ian.T
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N.G.

16 years 9 months ago

I enjoyed reading this, and

I enjoyed reading this, and loved the way it was just as free as the wind itself Sincerely N.G.

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