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Sep 09, 2009
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Like a stain in the brain
How could I forget
the feeling like kneeling
down on the grass
to study a butterfly or a fine leaf
even though its so brief
when they flutter away
their colours remain
like a stain in the brain
and our feelings flow free
the wing beats of colour re echo about
in the belfry of sounds so soft
so loving and true not purple or blue
like sunshine in sunbeams
awaking our dreams
this life is so wondrous
so magic
it seems to be real
the feel of your heart beats
is close to me now
when I see the butterfly
stopped on your brow
to caress your fine face
for me now full of grace
showing my love is forever
no never
will I tire of your eyes
I perspire at their sight
in the light
of your room
you stir in my womb
on the loom of life's boon
now I swoon.
— Nordic cloud, Sep 09, 2009
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Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh crikey did I write that ?
Geezer
16 years 9 months ago
Love should....
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh Sir Gee
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Dear Ann H
Nordic cloud
16 years 9 months ago
Oh what a beautiful comment,
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Ann you always inspire me ,
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
My Dear Ann
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