Guilty

Guilty I am wracked with guiltI am guilty of loving you.-Passionately-The light of Love within meReaches through and shows me my path.Yet, I am also humanI allow desire to guide me instead.Do I wait another life’s timeFor our souls to meld.Living an honourable way,Alone,Without you?You have much to loose! StillThe melody of our joiningThe being together as oneThe fitting together faultlessly…Lures me to the very waters edge,Will I drown in our ocean of love?

— seabhac, Sep 19, 2009

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Hmmm. I so know this

Hmmm. I so know this feeling, so perfectly poemed. ~A p.s. I am already drowned.

seabhac

16 years 8 months ago

Drowned and lived to tell the tale

Hope indeed A. Thanks for taking the time to read

hugo la rosa

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Seabhac:

This is a lovely poem, filled with longing and choice words. You are indeed in love with love itself, and there is no cure for that, except to pour your soul in your poems. Excellent! Always, Hugo

seabhac

16 years 8 months ago

In love with love itself

In love with love itself ...hmm there in may lay the problem. I guess there may be many poems to follow this one then having no other cure. Thanks Hugo Liz

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