He watches Our Children

Moon shines bright in sky
Smiles down as our children sleep
protecting till dawn

— greeneyes, Sep 22, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

Critiques

lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

Love it.I believe this. Lyz X

greeneyes

16 years 8 months ago

thank you. I love the moon,

thank you. I love the moon, and i love the night. greeneyes

believe

16 years 8 months ago

I wrote kiddies stories about a character I made up called Mr Moon, used to watch over the children and come down to help, So this is a part of what I called the enchanted side of the night, "got them to sleep" wonderful stuff love it LuvRay

greeneyes

16 years 8 months ago

ray

Well hello! you havent been around in a while! Wonderful to see you. Thank you so much for reading my poem. Greeneyes

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Does the moon maiden have

Does the moon maiden have green eyes? adorable moonlit poem. ~A

greeneyes

16 years 8 months ago

thankyou

thankyou everybody

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