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Sep 25, 2009
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Hot Pete
His name is
Hot Pete
although
I would not
date him
if you
paid me
he makes
an awful
lot of noise
when I
try to
turn him
on
clunkity clunk
so much
for modern
technology
although
he shares
a common
thread
with my
girl Macky
couldn't find
it in my
heart to
call him
Hewett
what other
name can
you come
up with
for a printer...
Hot Pete
although
I would not
date him
if you
paid me
he makes
an awful
lot of noise
when I
try to
turn him
on
clunkity clunk
so much
for modern
technology
although
he shares
a common
thread
with my
girl Macky
couldn't find
it in my
heart to
call him
Hewett
what other
name can
you come
up with
for a printer...
— Fleur MacDonald, Sep 25, 2009
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Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Fleur
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 8 months ago
hey you
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Hey back atcha (hug)
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