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ishaq
Sep 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Renaissance of our Spirit

Let us strive to be happy eternally
Amidst disillusionment and fear
Against insensitivity and rivalry
Something ordained us to hear
Lo! all the universe is spiritual
Neither banal nor material
A key to the secret divine
In a renaissance of our spirit fine

— ishaq, Sep 26, 2009
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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Is

Beautifully profound poem I loved it ... one small tiny thing I think it will help the flow,if you leave the [for] out of something ordained [for] us to hear just a suggestion but a wonderful poem I enjoyed throughly Kind regards Jayne
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ishaq

16 years 8 months ago

Dear JayneThanks for your

Dear Jayne Thanks for your encouraging remarks. [For] stands deleted as suggested. Best regards, Ishaq

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