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Sep 26, 2009
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Lonely Candle
Lonely candle on the sand
The April wind blows
But the flame stands tall
Strong
Flickering on
The sole source of light
On a dark ocean night
On this early spring eve
I visit this place
I kneel at the candle
Whisper a prayer
Heave a soft sigh
Shed a small tear
The flame flickers out
But in my heart
The flame burns on
Always present
Watching over
Lighting the path
Warming my soul
I feel her there with me
And I smile at Heaven— ginnydragon54, Sep 26, 2009
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Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Ginny,What a beautiful
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
I agree with Jayne
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