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Vocal Repercusionists

Cascading words
are for the birds
as the crumbs fall to the ground,

the tongue is a knife
that can cut up a life
done mostly, by it's own sound.

Parading thoughts
words tied in knots
listening, not at all by one's choice,

opaque and clear
the words fall on one's ear
but, it was mostly the tone of your voice.

Through the subtlies displayed
one finds one dismayed
by a language, ambiguous at best;

but, off come the ears
and realized are one's fears
seems all involved are being put to the "test".

Look away, if you will
but, you'll hear it all...still
maybe one of us soon will rejoice,

the day seems so long
it really wasn't the song
it was mostly the tone of your voice.
— docmaverick, Sep 27, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Doc

You are my first of the rank this morn, and I found your poem so fitting at the moment, to everyone's delight I am losing my voice.Lol. They said that they will have a bit of piece for a while. lol. i think it is the tone of my voice as well. But to your poem, I did enjoy this, in this sort of situation that you have wrote of, I must be the mouth, I say some terrible things sometimes. It is so easy to hurt with a few sharp words and yet braver to walk away.I wont go into a big spiel, I did enjoy,thank u and well done, Love from Lyz. XX
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

I know, Lyz....

...of what you write. Each voice can be used in so many positive ways...too bad, there's so many voices used negatively. Thanks for reading. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 8 months ago

I Loved this....

May it never happen to me, Losing my voice I mean...however this is so perfectly set for me...the tongue...what a dangerous weapon....and yet we all carry this weapon to be used at any point in time....may we control this weapon all through our lives...great write...Thanks Doc., your poetry excites my very soul...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks, antoinette marie....

....and I appreciate the stars, too. Mostly though, I thank-you for the grace you always display in your comments. You are very kind, indeed. Great avatar ! As well ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

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