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Oct 02, 2009
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HOLY DAY OF INDIA
Holy Day of India He was sent to this earthTo spread His mercy as loveHe was tested in this earthto show the power of truthHe was kept in prisonto remove the bondages of her motherHe gave his life with bloodto prove the power of LoveHe came as a child andWent from this land as a pureHe gave his weapons to usto correct this world from it’s errorsIt is the day of our great soulTo pray and to recollect His memories
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 02, 2009
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