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HOLY DAY OF INDIA

Holy Day of India He was sent to this earthTo spread His mercy as loveHe was tested in this earthto show the power of truthHe was kept in prisonto remove the bondages of her motherHe gave his life with bloodto prove the power of LoveHe came as a child andWent from this land as a pureHe gave his weapons to usto correct this world from it’s errorsIt is the day of our great soulTo pray and  to recollect His memories 
— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 02, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

You have written a very stirring poem. Thanks for sharing. Always, Cat

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