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Oct 05, 2009
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A hovel in the Wilderness
A hovel in the wilderness -
If I gaze long enough
Only that which is not there do I see
A dreamed vista
The mad man cries to heaven
A sullen silence
In His absence
An ancient garden grows wild
Dead lovers turned to stone waiting to awaken. . .
If I gaze long enough
Only that which is not there do I see
A dreamed vista
The mad man cries to heaven
A sullen silence
In His absence
An ancient garden grows wild
Dead lovers turned to stone waiting to awaken. . .
— Dalton, Oct 05, 2009
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Fleur MacDonald
16 years 8 months ago
The feeling of this
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Okay, I missed this one.
amalzamani
15 years 11 months ago
no ordinary
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