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Oct 16, 2009
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childhood (for Timothy Joyce)
We awoke in those days
with our bellies swelling in
private palm-grips of enthusiasm.
The bus was a yellow flag screeching
to life our hungry allegiance.
Life was a finely tuned sound. A seamless
coat, worn, buttoned by an endlessly forgiving
lifeforce.
And we wore the steamed dawn
climbed the sharp sunrise
ate the straying lilypads.
— Quillsvein1, Oct 16, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
This is breathtaking Q. Not
Quillsvein1
16 years 8 months ago
Anna
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear GB
bjp
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Quillsvein1,
Quillsvein1
16 years 7 months ago
Well
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