Child Of The Dark

I walk in the night, beneathe the big bright moon
The coming of Mother Darkness will be soon
With her pale white skin and long dark hair
No other beauty can even compare
She is the queen of all that is dark
Our nightly adventure we are about to embark
We wake her subjects, the creatures of night
To see them emerge is an awsome sight
We dance in the forest,under the moon's ghostly glow
We are the children of darkness, and we love her so
Come play with us we always have fun
We will be here till the first sign of the sun

— greeneyes, Oct 18, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

Critiques

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Love this

Hey this is brilliant and I had so many visions in my head while reading. Such a treat to brighten the day, even though she is a child of the dark, lol. You are such a grand story teller and I love it. Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX

Pseudonym

16 years 7 months ago

wow

this is really good.. i like the flow.. was sort of relaxing for me and let my imagination run wild.. no wait, loved the flow lol.. i really enjoyed it a lot.. thank you.. Take care :)

Poetree

16 years 7 months ago

Hey,I really like this

Hey, I really like this one!!! X

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