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Oct 24, 2009
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Existing
Empty inside where something once stirred
Handfuls of bliss residing in memories unkept
Remorseful choices saddled like cactus to my spine
Simple wishes realized, patching holes with silk
Flailing efforts adrift an ocean of endless circles
Handfuls of bliss residing in memories unkept
Remorseful choices saddled like cactus to my spine
Simple wishes realized, patching holes with silk
Flailing efforts adrift an ocean of endless circles
— jamadarie, Oct 24, 2009
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