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Oct 24, 2009
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P R E C I P I T A T I O N
sigh in glade green that shadows thoughts
the chilled seeping of the cloud
that daybreak brought
cool whisper of traffic tires
and furled thick cloth
the angle looks
and purpose eyes
transition searchs
and errand walks
prisoner leaves still cling to limbs
their time done they wait the
break to fill the puddle brackish
mirror to touch the sky
and nestle in thin depths within
while me myself and I
turn turnstile memory
and wait for comfort in the
hunger eyes
sheet glass calculation
and sleight of smile
Islands hover in the mist
the green grey mystic
lady lake
the sheen of light on rail lines
and dripping patterns
on zinc chain link
the hours move like house
dreams filled with wet pattern
I weave my searching
animal and prowl
pupil wide
in rich sublime
the magic of the deep of light
October Twilight
— orgami, Oct 24, 2009
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Seren
16 years 7 months ago
And magic it is Steven …
bunnymug
16 years 7 months ago
loved this
orgami
16 years 7 months ago
It is seeing the unseen
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