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Canned Biff

I know a man, we'll call him "Biff"
an independant soul is he.
He roams the less traveled paths
and beds down under a tree.

He's not afraid to speak his mind
or pray on bended knee.

He'll search for just the perfect words
leaving you not much to say.
Eating as little as the birds
wearing clothes in the style of  "fray".

Aluminum cans and copper
are his quest from day to day.

Sensitive in nature
yet pragmatic in his thoughts,
The desert breeze puts on the squeeze,
tying most mens souls in knots. 

With weather, his lone companion,
he connects the dots to dots.

He has no need for protocol,
his itenerary's few;
some days, time beats for him, alone...
leaving him, not much to do.

But, mostly he's a servant
to his jaded point of view.

You probably won't notice him
as he roams from place to place;
his gaze evades judgemental eyes,
but, he'll look you in your face...

...and give you your own flowers,
he picked, and arranged in your own vase.

Not necessarily a loner,
but, always living on the go,
the wealth he owns is measured not...
...in increments you'd know.

For he is free of most the chains
that binds the status quo.
— docmaverick, Oct 28, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Doc

I have read this before I am sure of it ... and I really love what you have done with it ... theres a sad poignant truth in this one ... many live like this in rapture of freedom I envy them ... love and hugs Jayne x x
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Doc

What a marvel and I enjoyed it very much and if it is a rewrite, well I missed it but I am looking forward to part 2. We too have men and women like this and I think it is cruel but there is one man who chose to live like this and when he died in the gutter, they traced his family and he was quite a rich man. Oh well great poem Doc. Love to you and yours. Lyz. Xx
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 7 months ago

Yes Doc...

It sounds familiar, however, enjoyable just the same....and the presence of this fellow is abit hollow and sad, however I enjoyed the write..as usual...so keep on keeping on....Antoinette Mari
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ngaioBeck

16 years 7 months ago

Biff

A tale of a man to be envied---well told!

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