welding lesson

>
run
one
gentle
fingertip
slowly
along
the
long
line
where
your
lover's
body
and
your
body
meet
>

— Rob Graber, Oct 28, 2009

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Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Rob

Thats really clever Rob my mind went instantly to welding lol my dad was always welding something when I was growing up ... but the welding the two lovers ... ah now thats beautifully poignant ... loved this one :) Love and hugs Jayne

Rob Graber

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks!

It creates a really nice sensation too--preferably without the gloves, mask, coveralls, etc. ... 8-D? Thanks very much indeed!

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Oh, such a touch, Rob!

Oh, such a touch, Rob! Lovely lovely! ~Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

Rob Graber

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks!

Thanks for the clever comment!

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

superb!

I feel the sparks! Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

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