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Dec 08, 2009
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Sunshine Lost
Sunshine Lost
Give this winter life a breath of light
It’s grey and dreary sky leaves ashes of snow in flight
Blocking out the sun and Trapping in cold
Its bitter twisted thoughts arctic blast unfold
Like all living life will come to and end
Winter rears its ugly head again
It’s cold touch of death consuming all in its path
Washing away playful carelessness in a white ice bath
I feel its deathly hand grip at my soul
Freezing and cracking and chilling my bones
Not quick to kill but a torture die slow
Don’t move, be still it’s commanding voice grows
I need to feel the sweet caress of springs laughing rain
I need to feel the loving comfort of its warmth again
I need the easy living that summer once brought
I need the happiness of my sunshine now lost
— Spectrum, Dec 08, 2009
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moianna
16 years 6 months ago
thanks, someone that feels
themoonman
16 years 6 months ago
Spectrum...
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