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Hi Moiana welcome to Neo, this is a good little poem, really clear & just the right balance... like an iceburg, the top looks like it isn't too heavy, then the lower section is revealed & carries lots of weighty meaning, it sits just right. I wish you some of our warm Summer from Australia Cheers Anni~ "When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace". H.H. the Dalai Lama

Welcome to the site, I too liked your poem, short and full, but leaves me wondering(which is also good), where, is it a physical place you have been brought to, or a dark place in your heart... no need to answer me, I like that you gave the reader the opportunity to interject, yes... a very good first post. welcome again Richard

Welcome to neopoet i liked this, it was short? but packed a punch I look forward to your next kind regards Jayne