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Onions You are betterthan A invisible God

Onions  You are better than A invisible God

 

Onions You are better than a invisible God

You’re visible and helping us to eat

You’re cheaper to have

than my worships and rituals

Oh Onions !

We have created you and harvested you

You gave better result to our work

Oh God !

You are silent on seeing Poors

You are giving fortunes only to rich and wealthy

It is available even for two rupees

It can be cooked even with out oil

But My God!

Can I see you in temples with out money

Can I have your blessings with out tickets

Oh Onions !

You are very closer to a man from a slum

You are impartial to rich and poor

But My Invisible God!

Are you near to us?

Do you favor anything to poor?

Oh My Onions !

Though you are cheap and abundantly available

You are strengthening our heart

By purifying our blood

You are too better than my invisible God

But My Invisible God

What did you do So far?

You have increased worries and pressure

Instead of releasing them

If You are here ,

You will have to protect humbles from the giants

You will have to feed

all lives in this land

Trillions are dying  and billions are going to die

in the race of searching food

But My Onions!

You are doing something to your masters


— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 18, 2009

Critiques

Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Onions...

Onions feed the body, and comfort the belly. But if that is all you have to eat, then no wonder God doesn't come around too often. Sounds like a crisis in faith Sakkkkkkk. Great poem though. ~ Gee

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