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Dec 22, 2009
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Life,an art
Beings are mould to display a picture
The art displayed dicticts our entails
If the mind we potray were to be art
The words we alter will be a full image
The world stomach billions of men
With only two pictures to speak whom we are
The path to which all thoughts are acted
Comes as forcast from a scene on our minds
All our past flashes as views
Views produced with the touch of colour arrays
If the deeds of all is to be mend
Plus the will of means be acted
it will come to view as slides
Creating an insight into men as man
The art displayed dicticts our entails
If the mind we potray were to be art
The words we alter will be a full image
The world stomach billions of men
With only two pictures to speak whom we are
The path to which all thoughts are acted
Comes as forcast from a scene on our minds
All our past flashes as views
Views produced with the touch of colour arrays
If the deeds of all is to be mend
Plus the will of means be acted
it will come to view as slides
Creating an insight into men as man
— tsbabadepoet, Dec 22, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
badly in need of some spellchecking, Tsbaba
tsbabadepoet
16 years 1 month ago
Correction
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
up the top of the page,
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