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Dec 23, 2009
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Promise Mills
Over the hills and through the dells
Our precious little ones they dwell
In the thundering cold dark of night
They choose to do that which is right
There they are willing to risk their lives, their limbs
Where and when the duty is called upon them
Fueled by the belief that "They" would not lie
Our children let out their battle cries
All the while we are here at home, alone
Thinking are we, will they be coming home?
Hoping we were not fooled again
Hoping this time "They'll" let us win
But, why must we fear?
Why do we care?
Because the enemy is not seen
Cloaked in his obscure money green
Blood stained bills and promise mills
Black Waters distilled spills
Any one of them could be sacrificed
Unknowingly forfeiting their lives
At the whim of the "Others"
So guard closely our sons and our daughters
Our precious little ones
For they belong to everyone
And not to our "Promise Mills"
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Our precious little ones they dwell
In the thundering cold dark of night
They choose to do that which is right
There they are willing to risk their lives, their limbs
Where and when the duty is called upon them
Fueled by the belief that "They" would not lie
Our children let out their battle cries
All the while we are here at home, alone
Thinking are we, will they be coming home?
Hoping we were not fooled again
Hoping this time "They'll" let us win
But, why must we fear?
Why do we care?
Because the enemy is not seen
Cloaked in his obscure money green
Blood stained bills and promise mills
Black Waters distilled spills
Any one of them could be sacrificed
Unknowingly forfeiting their lives
At the whim of the "Others"
So guard closely our sons and our daughters
Our precious little ones
For they belong to everyone
And not to our "Promise Mills"
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Dec 23, 2009
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weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
good poem
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 4 months ago
Thank You Jess I often
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
better
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 4 months ago
I like the little ditty you have penned
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