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Grefsen church in a tree
Caught half way up a tree
the church,
its ghost-like shape
all white with snow
shines in the early morning sun,
not Sunday
but the holy days round Christmas time
when minds stray through
the creeds and psalms
of Christianity,
and in the north see virgin snow-clad hills
soothe all the ills
of modern society.
Quietened in the Winter's grip
slow birds rise to reach the tips
of branches tall,
sunbathing to keep alive,
while the palest blue sky
a water colour wash,
fades to a yellow near the tops
of fir-packed woods,
their dark greens faded,
laden sculptures
close together huddled,
birches brown so thin
that no snow can stick
a shock of hair
just standing there.
The roofs of houses
each facet white as white,
the canvas of the artist
seeds and falling dust
a collage make
their slates unblemished now
they await the art of nature
with her brush
she may not like her effort,
provide a wind
and whisk it off;
and look beside the chimney
stands the owl,
he is wise as well we know
and finds the warmth from fires
changing his mien to black,
he dons his academic gown
don't frown!
Critiques
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
Wonderous
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Dear Ann
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Ann
orgami
16 years 5 months ago
from different eyes
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
It looks as though you have
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT omg omg
Nordic cloud
16 years 5 months ago
Am I where? Jayne
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Paintings by Mother...
Geremia
16 years 5 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaJust
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Ann,
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Delightful Christmas gift
Nordic cloud
16 years 5 months ago
Och aye, Hogmanay is for me.
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Long Live the Queen...
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