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Grefsen church in a tree

 

Caught half way up a tree

the church, 

its ghost-like shape

all white with snow

shines in the early morning sun,

not Sunday

but the holy days round Christmas time

when minds stray through 

the creeds and psalms

of Christianity,

and in the north see virgin snow-clad hills

soothe all the ills

of modern society.

 

Quietened in the Winter's grip

slow birds rise to reach the tips

of branches tall,

sunbathing to keep alive,

while the palest blue sky

a water colour wash,

fades to a yellow near the tops

of fir-packed woods,

their dark greens faded,

laden sculptures 

close together huddled,

birches brown so thin

that no snow can stick 

a shock of hair 

just standing there.

 

The roofs of houses 

each facet white as white, 

the canvas of the artist

seeds and falling dust

a collage make

their slates unblemished now

they await the art of nature 

with her brush

she may not like her effort,

provide a wind 

and whisk it off;

and look beside the chimney

stands the owl,

he is wise as well we know

and finds the warmth from fires

changing his mien to black,

he dons his academic gown

don't frown!


 


— Nordic cloud, Dec 28, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Wonderous

I just love the picture this poem brang to my very being. Such a lovely way to start my day off. I could paint this picture upon my wall and see the beauty that lies within it. Very well written my friend. You are a champ to me!! love Magics02 p.s. makes me want to get on that treadmill with all the dust on it. (laugh)
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Dear Ann

*Big Smile* and we can see the church amoung the trees as well through your eyes ;) brilliant write dear lady love and hugs Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Ann

What a picture you paint. With a view like that, why would you want to go out. You can weave a masterpiece at times and I think this is one of those times. Wonderful. I sigh. Love Lyz. XX
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orgami

16 years 5 months ago

from different eyes

spellbinding we used to recieve National Geogrpahics for christmas year gift I remember reading so much from this American Publication it was this I heard about Hans Christian Anderson and I remember the pics from Denmark and his works lately I had been reading from your notations stories of Norway we had flyers train in the little airports for world war two around our area Your descriptions in poetry telling are transfixing me with awe and I see my buildings and land about me here in a different light thank you ann the power of the poetry the might of the poetess
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

It looks as though you have

It looks as though you have advanced your style some what to a more austere brevity and I will return to comment with alittle more detail .I gather you are cozy warm by the fire watching your beloved mountain covered white with protruding evergreens. Barry,,,o,,
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT omg omg

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT omg omg omg my lady of the north in spotlight ... my goodness I am sooo pleased to see you here my dear friend mountains of hugs and love Jayne x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Am I where? Jayne

I can never see the spotlight until I log out as I go straight form mail to here, I don't even know how to get to the spotlight without logging out, silly mutt what! Oh thank you, you(Plural) who are responsible, my little thoughts while exercising bore the fruits of understanding the simple things that happen and that we see and that have often the best feeling of existence, and at this time of year especially so. I experienced this view as something complete and tried to convey that to you, feeling it was only a sudden thought but you have put it here, wow. No accounting...what? Love you all Ann of Norway
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Paintings by Mother...

We all know the Mother Nature is proud of her work, and loves to show off! You have given even those who don't get much snow, a look at her handiwork. She has a steadfast patron in you my Queen. Your keystroke painting of this scene is delicious! ~ Happy New Year, Your frozen knight, Sir Gee
Geremia

Geremia

16 years 5 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaJust

J.B. Longo-Geremia Just amazingly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Veramente una bellezza, Annuccia.... Longobardolino
ID

Ink Dragon

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Ann,

this poem has all the charm of your photos and paintings. It is a painting, for the reader to behold. Thank you for sharing your view with us. Yours, ~Nina P.S. To see Spotlight, just click on the Neopoet logo in the upper left-hand corner, that will take you to the Neopoet home page.
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 5 months ago

Delightful Christmas gift

loved the soft embrace of this. The tale of wise old owl with sooted wings but the part that captured me most were the lines they await the art of nature with her brush she may not like her effort, provide a wind and whisk it off; Beautifully put to capture the very act in the minds eye Happy Hogmany to you Ann Seabhac
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Och aye, Hogmanay is for me.

Out onto the doorstep at midnight, the stars and moon decorating the frosty air the sound comes floating on the breeze, of bagpipes, wafted high, then low, a mystical atmosphere of dark and light still and waiting, then we went with some coal or a log to the next house, taking warmth for the next year as a gift, where they joined us and moved on the the next until there were a great number of neighbours who stopped at the last house and there created a Ceilidh and every member of the community performed a dance, a song, played an instrument recited poetry, whatever they felt like doing until the wee small hours when, after joining hands and singing Auld Lang Syne, they wended their way home again happy in the New Year. No fireworks, no noises in the still beauty of the night as the year changed its name in Scotland. In England my Irish/Scottish friend came round to us, where we indulged in a small glass of sweet Martini and listened to the Scottish wireless sending of New Year with dancing and music to which we too danced, we then opened the window and let the old year out, welcoming the new in. Horrified one time to see the neighbour was cleaning her teeth at the hour. In France my first time at New Year we happened to be in someone's car, and suddenly all the traffic came to a standstill in the centre of Bordeaux, the sky was full of fireworks and all the cars blew their horns as long as they could, a most deafening sound and then as suddenly as it took place it stopped and all went about their business as usual. Then in Oslo, where the bangs started at 10 am. sporadically, to slowly gather in numbers as the evening neared 8 p.m.. then at nearly midnight the explosions reached their climax and the whole of the sky was filled with enormous flowers of fire in all colours. This continued for at least an hour polluting the woods with smoke, probably making the birds cough on their perches, dogs howl and cats hide and if one wishes to sleep one has just to forget it until they at last give up. The bangs are going on just now out in my view, in the dark of the frozen night. I sit in here after having had a chicken meal that I have to admit was good with the glass of red wine to go with it. I WISH YOU ALL A HAPPY YEAR WITH MANY FINE EXPERIENCES AND GOOD HAPPY POEM WRITING. Thank you for all your encouraging comments, thank you all. LOVE FROM ANN OF NORWAY.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Long Live the Queen...

I really love the way you always give us something of your experiences. This time being the way different countries celebrate the coming of the New Year. I love the little bit about the lady next door brushing her teeth. What a grand way to celebrate the new year coming in! Makes you wonder why she was brushing her teeth at that time of the night? Maybe...Nah... Anyways I truly love these little bits. Happy Hogmanay, to your household my Queen. Your humble knight,~ Sir Gee.

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