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Dec 28, 2009
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My Scar
the delight of enemy reflects
in the glimmer of an old scimitar
the pain of my defeat sticks
as a bloody scar on my steel armor
ironically you find both artifacts
hung side by side in the city museams
wall!!!
in the glimmer of an old scimitar
the pain of my defeat sticks
as a bloody scar on my steel armor
ironically you find both artifacts
hung side by side in the city museams
wall!!!
— Dark.Poetress, Dec 28, 2009
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lyz
16 years 5 months ago
My first smile for the day
Dark.Poetress
16 years 5 months ago
kool thx I actually have a
Dark.Poetress
16 years 1 month ago
i didnt know u were Casper,the friendly ghost...
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