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Nothing in the Night

 To become nothing in the night

We are a waning gibbous

By orbit darkness worn

Until a shadowed smudge

No further rounds to come
 

Smudge to smudge

Dusk to dusk

 

The last reflected sliver of the sun

 

Of lighted nights

And darkened days

Sun shined times

And glowered sights

 

Reflections launched

on eternal reverent  trails

Photon traces of a tale

Told unseen, untouched

 

Yet still a signature

Of everything we have done

To be hidden but forever present

By the dark ephemeral light


— ArrowWords, Dec 29, 2009

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Country/Region: CAN

Favorite Poets: Dylan Thomas, Walt Whitman, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Leonard Cohen, Constantine Cavafy

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16 years 5 months ago

Wonder

I feel this poem and love the picture it colors in my mind. Very well done my friend. I would like to see more of your works. Ms Mona

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