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Only

I can't talk.
I can't breath.
Unless your near.
Near me.
Near my wide,
wide and broken eyes.

You were driven here.
For one reason.
And one reason only.

To be like sidewalk chalk.
Here only to be washed away.
Washed away beside me.
And beside me only.
— broken_skye, Dec 29, 2009

Critiques

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Amethyst

16 years 5 months ago

brevity

I like this so much...I'm a fan of simple brevity in writing...your poem really spoke from the soul. Excellent. peace
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Silent_Rain

16 years 5 months ago

AWWW

Very pretty poem sis!!! LOVE YA!! ~Rain~

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