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Dec 29, 2009
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The Lost Cause Tree
it's breathtaking
how fast it comes and goes
and longs to pass
and the things that tie together
are the only things
that you remember
so climb to the top
of the lost cause tree
where you can see for miles
all the things you cannot be
how fast it comes and goes
and longs to pass
and the things that tie together
are the only things
that you remember
so climb to the top
of the lost cause tree
where you can see for miles
all the things you cannot be
— zach, Dec 29, 2009
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broken_skye
16 years 5 months ago
Very Nice
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Zach,
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Zach
zach
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks for the tips, I’ll
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