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Dec 30, 2009
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Rose
Imagine a rose
a beautiful rose.
One you raised yourself.
A scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
Now imagine that scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
the one you raised yourself
slowly and carefully wither away.
Now that scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
is a light brown.
All slumped over and dieing.
And no matter how hard you try to save it
it dies.
So what did you do?
Did you cry or wen?
No you went to the store and bought another one.
But in the end you find out that
that rose was special and
can't be replaced in any
way, shape, or form.
a beautiful rose.
One you raised yourself.
A scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
Now imagine that scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
the one you raised yourself
slowly and carefully wither away.
Now that scarlet red rose
with just a dot of pink
is a light brown.
All slumped over and dieing.
And no matter how hard you try to save it
it dies.
So what did you do?
Did you cry or wen?
No you went to the store and bought another one.
But in the end you find out that
that rose was special and
can't be replaced in any
way, shape, or form.
— broken_skye, Dec 30, 2009
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Critiques
Silent_Rain
16 years 5 months ago
Good poem Skye...
broken_skye
16 years 5 months ago
Rain Thanks But...
BrightEyed
16 years 5 months ago
beautiful
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
A rose
ifoundaplace
16 years 5 months ago
Skye
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