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Dec 31, 2009
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Broken
Broken
Let me crawl into shadow
Watch me fade away
Twist and contort.
Take me to a hole and let go
Bury me into nothingness
Walk away, unchanged.
Destroy my soul
Leave me empty
Tip over my jar.
Cause me painful grief
In the seas of mistrust
left to devise my downfall.
Take out your sword
Stab my soul
Let me bleed.
All my love pours out
Let me sulk, broken
Sew myself together.
I push my self harder everyday, to pick up the broken pieces.
— sunscreen, Dec 31, 2009
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Aireal Steed
16 years 5 months ago
It doesn’t feel like it is
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Hmm.....................
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
I loved it again my guy
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Thanks :)
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