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Dec 31, 2009
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Another Scan
had these
headaches
for quite
some time
doctor said
people are
dirty
that's why
you
are sick
changed doctors
had a scan
then another
scan
doctor said
you have
a tumour
what the!!!
shed one tear
saw the
neurosurgeon
then the
endocrinologist
medication to
reduce it
then another
scan
then scoop
it out
through my
nostril
then probably
another scan...
headaches
for quite
some time
doctor said
people are
dirty
that's why
you
are sick
changed doctors
had a scan
then another
scan
doctor said
you have
a tumour
what the!!!
shed one tear
saw the
neurosurgeon
then the
endocrinologist
medication to
reduce it
then another
scan
then scoop
it out
through my
nostril
then probably
another scan...
— Fleur MacDonald, Dec 31, 2009
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Scanning your brain, the
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Fleur
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 3 months ago
I miss you and everyone too...
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
OH Fleur ((((hugs))))
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
Fleur, think about a blue
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